First Paper- Completed!

With the first paper i was a tad bit overwhelmed at first because i wasnt quiet sure how to put all of my thoughts into the paper. I did not like the peer review because i didnt really get much feedback from the people i was working with and i couldnt decide if it was becase they didnt understand my topic of if they just didnt have anything to say about it, but having a confrence over the paper helped tremndously! going through the paper with someone who understood what i was trying to say was very helpful and gave me a bunch of ideas, after the confrence i torn my paper apart word for word and attempted to make it better with the ideas that were discussed in my confrence, and now i feel confident about my paper.